tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post7657102391442966681..comments2023-11-11T03:34:32.779-05:00Comments on Green Monkey Tales: Lemon Juice - Part One in a Trilogy of Uncomfortable ComedyGreen Monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-84341336470059276252012-11-26T03:47:11.850-05:002012-11-26T03:47:11.850-05:00Hello Shannon, how are you? I hope you are well. ...Hello Shannon, how are you? I hope you are well. I read this story again, loved Morah Murphy, again. Looking for part two and three! :) I hope you are well Shannon.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-19739768283830731102012-11-09T12:11:33.239-05:002012-11-09T12:11:33.239-05:00Ha ha ha! Great story and it was good of you not t...Ha ha ha! Great story and it was good of you not to turn the troll in. Sending the drinks was the perfect thing to do! Looking forward to reading the other Monkey Tales!Marty Wombacherhttp://www.trippingwithmarty.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-26917037685175318472012-11-05T17:38:47.118-05:002012-11-05T17:38:47.118-05:00Umm, hello, I don't mean to pressure you, but,...Umm, hello, I don't mean to pressure you, but, ahem, I am tapping my foot waiting for part two!!! Comeon you Monkey, get crackin!!!Monkey Gurlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-25312292109484185402012-11-02T07:22:39.803-04:002012-11-02T07:22:39.803-04:00You made me smile and then chuckle with watery eye...You made me smile and then chuckle with watery eyes. You write so well and what a story-teller and you have memories to details too.<br /><br />How are you Shannon. Lisa (oceangirl)Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-597043011740105302012-10-24T12:13:53.859-04:002012-10-24T12:13:53.859-04:00I've been blessed in the "sex area"....I've been blessed in the "sex area". Not many men and they have all cared about me. I was always too scared to allow anyone to really get close to me so when I finally did fall for someone which was many moons from what the normal age would have been considered it was with a wonderful friend whom I still see every day and we r very close. He works in my office and has for 10 years. We won't ever marry. He has issues regarding marriage and just can't never marry again. But we are the best of friends and always will be. My other two lovers were good friends too. For whatever, God has blessed me with three wonderful men whom never hurt me or abused me in any way. But I understand ur story. Women just want to be "loved and cared for". I think however u finally found that in Mark. No? It seems that way to me and for that reason I am joyful for u. Don't be too hard on urself. But do share in story form because it was a great story. I don't think about it too much but I would love to have that kind of love one day too. The one where the man adores u. But I'm not sure it's possibly anymore truthfully.<br /><br />StormyDawn and ButtonsMiss Stormy "Gumshoe" Marpleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11633119568664037542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-29184501961856137262012-10-24T12:03:52.571-04:002012-10-24T12:03:52.571-04:00Fabulous writing. I enjoyed ur tale.
StormyDawn ...Fabulous writing. I enjoyed ur tale.<br /><br />StormyDawn and ButtonsMiss Stormy "Gumshoe" Marpleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11633119568664037542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-34755449223010623392012-10-23T23:11:44.922-04:002012-10-23T23:11:44.922-04:00ohhhhhhh!!!! damn Kim, that is so cool! I love tha...ohhhhhhh!!!! damn Kim, that is so cool! I love that it stayed with you. what a complement! :))))))) damn, I'm blushing! Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-15637255833085897592012-10-23T23:10:45.753-04:002012-10-23T23:10:45.753-04:00thanks for reading!!!!! and best of luck to your b...thanks for reading!!!!! and best of luck to your brothers band!!!Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-49789897128881171262012-10-23T21:40:13.572-04:002012-10-23T21:40:13.572-04:00So... I read your post this morning, and it stuck ...So... I read your post this morning, and it stuck with me ALL day. Even at the grocery store. While looking at lemons. And made me laugh over and over again. Thank you for your vulnerability. Oh, only if we were all so willing to be, life wouldn't be so stiff.<br />Keep writing woman. <br />Kkimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10611241991914496284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-55530994221914206872012-10-22T20:05:09.603-04:002012-10-22T20:05:09.603-04:00This is fantastic! The beginning of the story was ...This is fantastic! The beginning of the story was raw and relatable and then it turned into all kinds of delightful debauchery! Ballsy execution on sending them drinks! Ellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12680605959729330976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-9623816664649991352012-10-22T00:38:55.200-04:002012-10-22T00:38:55.200-04:00if there was a short attention span contest, I wou...if there was a short attention span contest, I would challenge you Ben! and because I'm confident about my short attention skills, I'm CERTAIN I would kick your ass! :) thanks for reading ..... ! Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-91558945152246248542012-10-21T23:48:26.550-04:002012-10-21T23:48:26.550-04:00Great story. Kept my short attention span :-)
I w...Great story. Kept my short attention span :-)<br /><br />I wish I could say I hadn't fallen for worse.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-56121121454853180992012-10-21T20:58:42.868-04:002012-10-21T20:58:42.868-04:00you monkey!
Warm Aloha from Honolulu
Comfort Sp...you monkey!<br /><br /><br /> Warm Aloha from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a><br /> <br /> > < } } ( ° >Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-34936495735940904312012-10-21T20:22:51.914-04:002012-10-21T20:22:51.914-04:00me too!!!!! still feel foolish. never saw it comi...me too!!!!! still feel foolish. never saw it coming why....? because its not something we would ever do! Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-27057168929353669852012-10-21T20:20:50.299-04:002012-10-21T20:20:50.299-04:00for legal reasons, Morah changed the name of the u...for legal reasons, Morah changed the name of the unfaithful husband and you're right, I'm guessing they are no longer a couple.Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-49889583646884884762012-10-21T20:17:55.143-04:002012-10-21T20:17:55.143-04:00thanks for reading Debra. It was so much fun to wr...thanks for reading Debra. It was so much fun to write and I'm still learning how to write dialogue. Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-82309692454791893392012-10-21T20:15:23.689-04:002012-10-21T20:15:23.689-04:00Thank you for reading Jeff. Look out, you could be...Thank you for reading Jeff. Look out, you could be next! :)Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-47455064859201358392012-10-21T19:38:45.432-04:002012-10-21T19:38:45.432-04:00LOL I'm sure his wife isn't faithful eithe...LOL I'm sure his wife isn't faithful either.<br /><br />Great story! I have a few stories to tell about bad dates but nothing like this one..musicwithinyouhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14024317988744024838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-26080667352543488702012-10-21T19:24:48.831-04:002012-10-21T19:24:48.831-04:00I met an architect through work. He asked me out. ...I met an architect through work. He asked me out. I went, nice dinner, but at the time I smoked and like a gentleman he would light my cigarette with my lighter. He dropped it in his coat pocket and then went to the little guys room. While he was gone I fished out my lighter and found his wedding ring. I was pissed! <br />He came back and suggested we go down the street to a motel and continue our date. I agreed. Once in the room, after he had paid for it -- nice room by the way, not a dive. I threw his ring at him, walked out and called a cab. Next day a co-worker laughed at me. She said he's here all the time, why didn't you just look at his hand. For some reason I felt the fool!<br />Well told!<br />Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-82895103338173567472012-10-21T19:19:59.668-04:002012-10-21T19:19:59.668-04:00Hahahaha -- great story! I liked the tie-in betwee...Hahahaha -- great story! I liked the tie-in between the two lemon scenes.Debra She Who Seekshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01845703092794695023noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-8916110138880949742012-10-21T19:15:59.993-04:002012-10-21T19:15:59.993-04:00I enjoyed that Shannon.I enjoyed that Shannon.Jeffrey Jenkinsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-45734263133539861452012-10-21T18:48:34.480-04:002012-10-21T18:48:34.480-04:00Chris.... its a funny thing. In my mind, here on m...Chris.... its a funny thing. In my mind, here on my blog site, YOU and the regulars truly feel like friends, and I have no problem being wide open. and then I remind myself how vulnerable I am. I think by confessing my insecurity at the beginning, I allow myself to admit when I've been played. That's really hard for me to do.... crazy monkey me. Thanks for reading! <br /><br />I am beginning to think that my "book" will be a compilation of frog's kissed. And yet, is that what I want to leave behind....<br /><br />oh....and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-49920573026357443182012-10-21T18:38:11.757-04:002012-10-21T18:38:11.757-04:00Shannon, some times life gives me, things, and som...Shannon, some times life gives me, things, and some times they are...<br /><br />Revel in the horrified expressions, when people read some of my work they are...<br /><br />:-)<br /><br />Wanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-77518003605010855942012-10-21T18:31:22.742-04:002012-10-21T18:31:22.742-04:00Thank you Juli!!!!
I was also surprised that he c...Thank you Juli!!!!<br /><br />I was also surprised that he called me back, but if you think about it... I knew where he lived and I think it was the proper englishman in him that prompted the call. <br /><br />or, at least, thats what Morah told me.<br /><br />by the way.... Morah is the name my father chose for me, but my mother, who doesn't want me to know that she moved, insisted on calling me Shannon. I'm thinking about changing my name. At the very least, developing a pen name.Green Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18427381976705069464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9132911385909998590.post-44770474367658174042012-10-21T18:19:49.595-04:002012-10-21T18:19:49.595-04:00So well written. And hysterically funny. I am su...So well written. And hysterically funny. I am surprised that Mr Bill would even call you back to tell you he was wrong...Julihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10097214923216967086noreply@blogger.com